Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Joy (Words)

Joy
This all happened in one day!  


I came home after work very tired, and went to put the key in the door but discovered it was already open. I was confused as I was sure I had locked the door before I went to work.


I pushed the front  door open and I walked inside looking around and closing the door behind me. I heard a noise outside so I turned around and peeped through the keyhole. There were three animatronic standing by the door.


I ran down the hallway and the hall door SLAMMED shut behind me. I grabbed the flashlight on the table, shone it around the room, and then heard bam bam bam bam bam BAM!


I was horrified to see Freddy, and I ran away as fast as I could.  I dropped my flashlight on the floor and the light scared Freddy off.  I picked up my flashlight and I ran and saw a poster on the wall with the old animatronics on it. I carefully took the poster off the wall and then my phone buzzed and it said, “One object.” If I could find another two objects I could escape!


A couple of minutes later Freddy came back into the hallway and I spotted him with my flashlight. I tried to flash him but he dodged the light. I tried another time, but he dodged it again. I tried it one last time, but my flashlight ran out of power.


Freddy ran at me, but I remembered that I had batteries in my pocket. I quickly put the batteries in my flashlight and shone it into his eyes. Freddy fell over and it looked like he was dying, but I knew it wasn't over. I didn’t wait for Freddy to die, just incase he got up again. I ran away as fast as I could down the hallway.


While I was running I discovered a red and white hat on a desk: it was an object. I picked the hat up and my phone buzzed again and this time it said, “Two objects!” Now I had the poster and a hat; I only had one to go!


When I went to find my next object I couldn't believe my eyes - Freddy had turned into Springtrap!  I tried to flash him, but it did nothing. I ran as fast as I could down the hallway with him glitching behind me; BOOM he had teleported in front of me and I nearly ran into him. I turned around just in time and ran into an empty room; a dead end. In the corner of the room was a stuffed Freddy toy. I knew Springtrap had trouble with death sometimes and might fall for a fake death.


I grabbed the fake Freddy and put it in front of me. Springtrap walked in and looked around and he saw me but walked out of the room! The fake death had worked, so I tiptoed out of the room and turned on my flashlight to try and find another object.   I walked straight  into Springtrap and he said, “Going somewhere?”  


“Yes, out of this house,”  I said.

We had a MASSIVE fight (see slide show).  Finally I knocked Springtrap out and when I looked up I saw the last object on the desk in the hallway - a key!  My phone buzzed, “Clever you, you have all three objects.”’ I was free!  But not for long. dun dun dun dunnnnnn

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mark my name is Tahurangi I’m a year 8 at Kawakawa primary school. I really like your writing about Joy. It makes me want to write and let my mind go wild. Can you post a new writing? Please thank you. If you want to visit my blog it’s http://kpstahurangic.blogspot.co.nz/

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