Hey guys. I did our final post on our current events! I talked about the Chinese getting a flag on the moon successfully. So I hope you enjoyed these posts!
I loved the descriptive word choice and array of Special Vocabulary that you instated in this presentation and how you really went in-depth on why they got their Flag on the Moon, I've never really known the Chinese side of the story so I enjoyed reading this post.
Maybe for next time you could work on your Spelling, Structure and Puncuation more.
Hello Mark,Jason here from Paroa school. This is really good but you spell somethings wrong in you work but it is good and maybe next time you can make the words bigger. Your sincerely Jason
Hi Mark.I really like work you had really good information and facts and photos.Next time you spelt china wrong.
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ReplyDeleteSalutations Mark, Carter commenting.
ReplyDeleteI loved the descriptive word choice and array of Special Vocabulary that you instated in this presentation and how you really went in-depth on why they got their Flag on the Moon, I've never really known the Chinese side of the story so I enjoyed reading this post.
Maybe for next time you could work on your Spelling, Structure and Puncuation more.
Sincerely, Carter.
Hello Mark,Jason here from Paroa school.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good but you spell somethings wrong in you work but it is good and maybe next time you can make the words bigger.
Your sincerely Jason